Deadly dreaming- WIP

This is page one to my comic Quarter stones. Now before you say anything I just wanna say don't bother me about working on it. I'm going to color it soon. And one more thing don't bother me in making the next page. I really don't want to put this up here yet either but I will anyway. Cause my sister will kill me if I don't.

CelestialMoonflower: Thank you
me: No problem

There are some flaws. The hands for one. They suck. And the body in the last panal. That sucks too. And the small panals that have little pictures/drawings in them. They suck as well. In fact the only cool thing is panal 7 and 8 with Ka-Jin and the sword in his face along with Kimeto reflecting off the sword. Other than that everything sucks. Aren't I optimistic?

CelestialMoonflower: Yeah right.
me:

It took me forever to make this. In fact I started it second hour at school and finished it 5c. Now get this. Our school has only 7 class periods in the day and the 5th is divided into three for lunch. A, b, and c. Useless but whatever.

I inked it at home and then erased the pencil and scaned it. Fixed it up a bit and vu al la. Now I need to color it.... but for now...
I SLEEP!!!!!!!